Hi World,
This is chapter 4 of my choose your own adventure book. If you have not read my book before: my book “BEHIND THE SCENES” is about a 12 year old girl named Mable who has lived at the Lepary hills underground headquarters ever since she can remember. And yes- you guessed it- she is an agent at the L.H.S.O (Lepary hills spy organisation). She is strong, smart and skilful in every area of the spy training system there is.
In my last chapter “Greetings by a Bash” Mabel was trying to find Haley. Mabel ended up with Haley coliding into her, so Mabel decided to… this is where you readers came and voted mostly for Mabel to start coughing like mad and see what Haley would do.
Chapter four:
Disappearence
Her fake coughing was working because Haley reacted really fast. She took Mabel down to a nurses office without uttering a word. The good thing about this was that the mission file was right about Haley being good hearted. The really bad thing was that Mabel didn’t get time to grab her magnetic microfibre backpack with all her disguised gadgets which anyone could mistake for real things and end up tasering, gasing, lasering or memory erasing themselves by accident. They could also find the tech gadgets and find out that Mabel was a spy.
At the sick bay Mabel almost was sick. because there right in front of her was Rob, her handler. He was even wearing the whole outfit, coat and all. He looked H,I,L,A,R,I,O,U,S. But when they were alone he exploded: “Don’t ask, Don’t talk. Me talk, you not talk cause I talk and you don’t. Ok so that was good that you found Haley. Whats bad? Haha, oh just your entire cover is about to be blown! Ok I will see if I can track your bag and blow it into smithereens but there may be some inquireys about that not too mention… um, not to mention cough drops- take plenty of those.” “What are you talking about? What are we going to do about the…?” Mabel shut her mouth. Haley had entered the room. She said that she was going to fetch Mabels bag for her. “Ok thanks.” “Wait! I mean don’t!” It was too late, Haley had gone.
Mabel raced to the place where her bag was, but what was this: the bag was gone! Haley wasn’t anywhere either! Rob started shouting in her earpiece again. “Well have you got it? Have you? Mabel?” This wasn’t right. Mabel felt confused, all she knew was that the bag was gone- and so was Haley.
Dun, dun, dun!!
Now your turn to choose how the story goes:
She jumped, she sat, she bent,
each has a different consiquence,
you choose a path to see,
what future Mabel will be,
make sure you choose what is right,
or you will find Mabel won’t rise…
Behind the Scenes
1) Mabel tells Rob to get Boss Maudly, the Boss usually knows what to do.
2) Mabel takes the earpiece out, and is determend to find Haley herself.
3) Mabel starts to look for evidence, only to find a note, a USB and- her memory erasing perfume and laser pen!
-Charlotte
Dear Charlotte, another good chapter..I am looking forward to more actions. So I choose option 2.
Hi Charlotte,
I vote for Option 2.
Karen
Hi Charlotte,
I vote option 3, that Mabel starts to look for evidence, only to find a couple of gadgets! I think this will be very interesting.
Izzy
Hey Charlotte,
I vote for option
3. Mabel starts to look for evidence, only to find a note, a USB and- her memory erasing perfume and laser pen!
Sam
Hey Charlotte,
Cool chapter! Rob MUST have looked pretty funny… He’s weird. I vote for option 2# because I feel as though Mabel needs to be strong and persevere to find her friend. I also vote for number 3- can’t decide!
Keep blogging,
Tess x
Hi Charlotte,
I vote for Option 3, because the evidence left behind creates drama and mystery.
Great Job!
Georgia
Hi Charlotte,
I choose option 2 because I think what will happen next will be interesting to read.
Elinor
Hi Charlotte,
I will vote for Option 2. I think Mabel would do that. I like the creative touch with the poem.
Please remember to categorise your posts.
You still also need to be a bit more careful with your editing. Some errors are creeping through.