Behind the Scenes (Chapter 5)

Hello Readers,

This is chapter 5 of my choose your own adventure book. If you have not read my book before: my book “BEHIND THE SCENES” is about a 12 year old girl named Mable who has lived at the Lepary hills underground headquarters ever since she can remember. And yes- you guessed it- she is an agent at the L.H.S.O (Lepary hills spy organisation). She is strong, smart and skilful in every area of the spy training system there is.


In my last chapter: Disappearance, Mabel was at the nurses office talking to her handler Rob (who was in disguise) about Haley. There was a problem though: Mabel had left her undercover magnetic microfibre backpack out in the open. Also in that backpack was all her disguised gadgets which anyone could mistake for real things and end up tasering, gassing, lasering or memory erasing themselves by accident. They could also find the tech gadgets and find out that Mabel was a spy. When Mabel tried to find the backpack Haley and the backpack had disappeared! You readers voted and it tied for option 2 & 3 so I decided option three would be the best. Here is chapter five:


Chapter five:

Uncovering the truth


Oh no, this was bad. This was really, really bad! Mabel decided that she shouldn’t panick, just go somewhere pretty much isolated and have a look at the objects left behind: A note, a USB, her memory erasing perfume and laser pen. She decided to check her gadgets first. They seemed normal, the laser pen worked exactly the same and when she scanned the memory eraser it was fine. She decided to look at the note.



Mabel, you and your entire orginisation are in danger, my so called father is out to get you and the LHSO (Lepary Hills Spy Orginisation). I know about this because I once had a friend who worked there and knew I was trustworthy. They told me about my father smuggling “Pupley’s Soda” that stops anyone from speaking and doesn’t have a cure. My father kidnapped them though and I have never seen them since. I know all about your mission and what you need to do. By the way I destroyed your baackpack and gadgets apart from the ones you have so no one can use them against you. If you are in, I will help you save the orginisation and stop Daniel (my “father”). Your mission if you choose to accept it is to destroy the USB which my Father needs to complete what he is trying to do. Also with the memory erasing perfume I need you to spray Rob your handler. Why: my dad implanted him with a microchip that is set to hurt you, the memory erasing spray will wear it off. I am sorry but you will need to trust me- my dad knows that I sent this to you, I need you to save me or he will succeed. Trust is the key to this mission.




Oh wow this explained a lot. Well, Haley hadn’t explained fully but Mabel knew that she could trust this note. She took the USB and lasered it, there was no chance of it working now. She had also worked out that Haley had meant she was trapped on Trustmis street in the house called “Sion” when Haley had said Trust and mission and key as in the way to unlock where she was. But there was one thing Mabel wasn’t sure about: What should she do? She wanted to go save Haley straight away, but what could she do? Daniel would probably have a lot of tricks up his sleeve- so mabye she should go to the orginisation first to get backup. But then what if Rob had been given instructions and she needed to spray him first? Oh Mabel needed to know what to do.


That’s the end of chapter five! Now Mabel really needs your help, what should she do?

a) Go to the orginisation to get backup so she can save Haley safely

b) Go to find Rob so she could ware off the chip and he could help save Haley

c) Go straight to save Haley bravley




3 thoughts on “Behind the Scenes (Chapter 5)

  • August 29, 2015 at 11:01 pm

    Charlotte, well..I didn’t expect Haley wrote that note & now these two girls are working together to destroy Daniel. ..I like it… I vote for option 2 because Mabel may not be able to handle Daniel on her own. Looking forward to the conclusion of your exciting story.
    Well done.

  • August 30, 2015 at 6:40 am

    Hi Charlotte,
    I will vote for Mabel to go straight to try and save Haley. If Rob is microchipped then I guess he might end up there too and be able to help. Thanks for posting.

  • August 31, 2015 at 6:35 am

    Hi Charlotte
    I say 3 she goes and saves Haley herself.
    I loved your story. A spy story is always good.
    I loved the note from Haley and everything.


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